The Gears of the Earth
- Beta reader feed back incorporated 90%
- Query – Even the Yugoslavian judge is holding up a 9. We have have a kick ass query
- Synopsis – Would rather set my face on fire with sterno and put it out with a golf shoe.
It is going to take some effort to get past this Synopsis gig. Putting the story back in the box makes me want to scream like some poor autistic kid at the line into the hall of mirrors are the fall carnival. Auuuugggggggghhhhhhhhhh!